This demo was AMAZING. I love visual novel/otome games but sometimes they take me sometime to get into. This sucked me in immediately! I think having some background knowledge (the fairy tales) also piques some interest. The art style is BEAUTIFUL and I find myself lost in the music. And you have it listed as free? I cannot wait to be able to play more.
Just look at that art difference!;D. Royal (left) from Locked Heart (Released January 2016). Waltz (right) from Cinderella Phenomenon (Estimated.
This was definitely one of the most amazing Visual Novels I have played. The music, the art, the story, the characters. It's all wonderful. You have my full support and I will anxiously be awaiting the full version!!!! Thank you so much for all the wonderful and encouraging comments everyone! It really means a lot to us. We are very happy that you all enjoyed the demo.We appreciate the feedback on the song everyone, but at this time we are not looking at changing the vocals.
Our vocalist sang the song for free, and we do not intend on asking him to adjust the vocals at this time.@FragolaGelato we were told that this is in the wrong tag since we originally added 'Simulation', so we are quite confused whether we should put it in the genre or not.;v. This looks amazing. Set the story development and characters development aside since I do not read the whole game yet, I love the music (in the game) and all the illustration as well as the background color. I love the idea behind this, using the fairy tales. It would be nice if there is easter egg, or something more related to fairy tales later.I agree with Makure here that the voice does not really fit with the song in the intro song.
His voice is kinda too low for the song, I think. You can try record another version with higher note and a little bit lighter.Also, the color in the setting is kinda confusing to me at first. It would be nice if you have a short cut for skipping the line that already read, or skipping all. A shortcut key for quick saving would be nice too.However, I really love the game.
Thank you so much for your effort. About the intro song: I agree with another review, the vocalist can't quite seem to hit the notes with the power needed to deliver, especially with THIS music.
I also think the effects used on their voice did them no service.I like the music a lot, along with the lyrics. This vocalist could probably do a softer or calmer song (I can see them doing a dark and melancholic song), but here the voice+effects seem to clash with the music.IDK if you have the power to rerecord or make adjustments. Kudos for making an original song. It needs work, but shows a ton of promise.Still gonna give a thumbs up, as this seems fairly promising.:)Hope to see this on steam!